LO4:Draft of film trailer

This is the first draft of the film trailer and we will not use these shots as they are not that good.
The acting in the draft isn't great so we need to film the scenes again. The draft Is really bad so we need to get new clips. The scenes at the start are to dark so for the next time we record we will use lighting or pick a day which we can include natural lighting.



This is a re draft for the draft 1 however I think we messed up with the naming of the draft so this is Draft 2.
The positives of this draft is that the start goes well and the middle goes well too. However some of the clips are not correct and we need to delete them. The transitions haven't been done just yet and the ending is pointless because we had a clip there


Draft 3
This draft isn't that good however it does have the start in it.
The positives of this draft is the start of the trailer as it is an accurate viewing of the proper one. Another positive is that it has a lot of clips that will be used or need enhancing for the next draft.
The improvement will be to re film some of these clips and remove some of the clips as you can see my reflection in the tram as it goes past. Another one will be to remove the one when he walks past the tram lines. one of the improvements will be to add colour to some of the clips


This is draft 4
This draft is a nearly completed version of the trailer.
The positives of this trailer is that the trailer runs very smoothly and it is nearly completed. The best thing about this trailer is the colour effect on the face and all the way through it has been put on.
The improvements for this draft is to change the start of the trailer so it starts with warp logo and the ending need to be quicker. The audio needs changing so it is louder